A casual check
Becomes a casual cry.
Shot from far and not
Each killing from inside.
Isolation becomes friend
No sight of this end
And beginning, lost from mind.
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A deadly weapon
A useful tool
Can provide and educate
Yet accessed by fools.
Full of hate and spite
No thought to us in sight
And with whom good and evil duels.
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The internet is what we speak of
The damage not yet done
We may speak for many
Whose lives were used as pun.
Victimized and alone
No one sees the image shown
Off screen as darkness stole the sun.
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Canary word: Present
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Really good poem.
You used really good strong words that are very descriptive and good at capturing the readers (me).
I didn't exactly understand some parts like:
Be a bit more specific and help out the readers.
is mixed up. Maybe write it like:
A useful tool
that can provide and educate,
yet a deadly weapon when accessed by fools.
This is just clearer and you can use "yet" better.
Anyways, good poem, and I hope you keep writing!
I really can relate to this poem and your title interested me from the beginning. So fare Nice poem, I enjoyed how your poem flowed and had enough to say the pain and hurt that bullies inflect so well done. Your imagery was spot on and I quite enjoyed it. Not sure how the periods after the sentence mean but still nice touch. Overall, well done
Nice poem! I think you have captivated the topic prettly well!*applauds*Internet does have it duel aspect that you mentioned.It is a shame and that people would use it for the negatives.I can say that your poetry can be waking call to "them"!
Keep writing!