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A/N for those who can't read this. because there are a small percent who brains have trouble with this type of article let me know in the comments if you'd like an unscrambled version. As for the why? it adds to the effects of the words. Hope you enjoy.

rihgt wno yur biran si dcphieernig tis msseagea sa fi yeo radenig this uscnmabled.
Yuo nad I, ew aer teh same, ew btoh have teh smae nureorn tansrmsiterts rleyanig this msseagea.

Ew ecah have wto seyes, a sone, nad a baeutfuli silem,
Ew btoh tmuleb nad flal, ety ew awlays satnd back pu tlal,
Ew ecah riaes ruo vioces, rtaltnig the fuondtaoin fo the coulds aovbe,
Yuo ese ew btoh rou the same isndie.

On mtaetr the sikn, rlegoin, rcae, ew aer hmuan bniges fo the same.

Ew smoetmies cyr, lugah, nad lvoe whti on cnouqset,
Touhg some siltl od nto ese this nad fro tehm a mssagea.
Fi I ctu ym  od I nto beled rde?
Od I nto loko uopn rou wrold ni wnodreemnt.
Ma I nto Unqiue?
Od I nto tyr ym bset ot ecxel on mtater the osbical?

Dno't you ese?
Ew rae teh same.

flolow this ym firned, terat lal lkie your niehgobr, nad rveael ot tehm lvoe,
terat srtnagres whit knindess rtaehr than htae,
nad lkoo uopn ruo wrold whit tshes lsesnos ym firned.

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RagingLive
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Wow! This is so cool! I have seen other versions of this type of thing, and most often catch myself in the middle of the article or sentence or whatever and do a double take. However the notice at the top of the page gave me good warning so I didn't have to stop and make sure I really was reading what I though I was. Good Job!
I loved how you added that "On mtaetr the sikn, rlegoin, rcae, ew aer hmuan bniges fo the same." (and I apologize for some auto-correct problems. I would like to commend you for the patience you must of had to have!)
~RagingLive

its alright there's a reason some words are normal, auto correct won that round :)

Ah auto correct... the writer's blessing and curse. :P

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Harker
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Unscrambled version? :(

All send it to your message in 5 min alright buddy

sent the unscrambled version buddy hope this helps

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Mea
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Mea wrote a review · Sat Dec 27, 2014 8:44 pm

I really liked this and I actually didn't find it that hard to read. I couldn't figure out some of the longer words, though. For the longer ones, I'd recommend keeping the first and last letters the same because when you read, your brain mostly recognizes the words by looking at their first and last letters and their length. It would just make it easier to figure out what the longer words are. I think you did it for most of them, but not all.

Also, this one sentence doesn't make sense:

If I cut my do I not bleed?

I think you forgot to put 'myself' instead of ' my.'

Other than that, this was great, and I really liked the scrambling trick.

Thanks, as for that its an old saying thought it worked. Thanks for the suggedtion though xD

Okay, I really like the idea of this poem. Being able to read something so scrambled is really neat :) and the meaning is something worth deciphering. Over all a unique poem with a refreshing style. :D

Just a few nit picks :) corrections are in (parenthesis) :

Yuo ese ew btoh rou the same isndie (rou should probably be aer :) )

(F)lolow this ym firned, terat lal lkie your niehgobr, nad rveael ot tehm lvoe(.)

(T)erat srtnagres whit knindess rtaehr than htae,

Fi I ctu ym od I nto beled rde? (you forgot to add slef)

There are a few places where you could have used a semi colon or a period instead of a comma. You could also rearrange certain letters to make them a little more readable, I had to re-read a few times, and there were a few words I never did figure out.

Like this one (cnouqset).

Keep writing, and keep up the creative ideas!!! :D

Sorry its conquest. And thanks :D



If you don't know it's impossible it's easier to do. And because nobody's done it before, they haven't made up rules to stop anyone doing that again, yet.
— Neil Gaiman