Dear dystopianmonkey01,
Eccentric Rose has dropped by to review your poem.
The Title- I am going to admit that the title was kind of boring and underplayed the intensity of the poem. When I see the word "Spectacles" it reminds me of an old man reading a book in a rocking chair...Not that that is bad scene, but I don't think it is the kind of first impression you are looking for.
When I started reading, you definitely captured my attention. This poem is not one of those cliche romance poems but it is much deeper.
"undress my eyes in the light" <----- This is amazing imagery.
It is very short for the amount of intensity/depth in the written words. I would like to see a continuation of it....but be sure not to turn the extension simple. The uniqueness to this poem is the words that make you think and contemplate the meaning of the words.
You have A LOT of potential. It was a pleasure reading and reviewing your poem!
~Rose
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