*cough cough*
It’s hard to believe that this is coming from you. I mean, you did admit that you didn’t like romance. xD
On a serious note, it’s a romantic poem, and I can feel that the speaker is struggling to confess to their love interest. Their feelings sound genuine and sincere – it’s actually very sweet/cute!
I don’t know much about poetry. Hence, I’ll mention just one technical aspect I thought you could improve in.
I felt that the two lines below didn’t flow (that rhymes!). This could be because the rest of your poem has a consistent – and somewhat clear – rhyming scheme.
My trust on you is so much strong,
I live my life with just one hope.
I start my day with you in my head,
You are there in my heart as well.
Aside from that, very well done! I enjoyed reading this.
Keep writing!
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