Revenge

by dasiamari

Published February 4, 2012

In songs

Wake up this morning
yesterdays memories
playing through your head.

Your so vindictive
set out for one thing
that revenge.

Chorus

But is it really worth it?
I know that you've been hurt
and left, forgotten so mistreated
second guessed
not the best anymore.
________________

And your out
I know what your after
heard you loud and clear.

So vindictive
out for vengeance.

Need blood spilled
to satify you
hunger for revenge.

Take deaths hand
he can give you what apologizes
never can.

Revenge he'll give you revenge.

Repeat chorus

Do you always
have to win?
Come out on top.
Is it like some kind of sick phobia
to be knocked down?

You have to push back
up and destroy those who made you fall
through revenge.
Comments & reviews · 2
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ela00051u commented Comment · Feb 11, 2013

its fine.

Thanks??

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LifeUnknown
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LifeUnknown wrote a review Review · Feb 11, 2013

This was really good. I enjoyed it.

I only had one problem.

You have your chorus labeled but that is it. And I can see you have and intro. You also have your verses, and outro/coda. But you don't have them labeled. If you did there would be no problem.

That's it. If you have questions about this review, just ask.

-LifeUnknown



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