easter
but when I added the salt, I thought
"my first boiled egg at home alone"
and knew it might not be alright
perhaps I'll burn my fingers;
just so there's something to remember
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I like it. A lot. There really isn't anything I can think of changing. It was short and sweet. Kinda reminded me of Emily Dickinson because of how short and to the point it was. Good job!
Well, thank you all; I forgot all about this little piece (an interesting one to come back to...), so ta muchly for taking the time to read it. Appriciated.
I liked it a lot, but i'm not sure you meant what I think you meant. Happy After Easter.
Pretty cool. I like to think I got all of that but what I got from it might not be at all what you meant. Chrystos Voskres
Thats good i liked the ending that was cool, you could change it abit maybe but i don't know exactly what needs changing