I like this too. And, yeah, why the colon? Was that a typo or why is it there?
I like the message, the sermon if you may that this poem is telling.
And I agree with Gummy said about the hooves beating on the ground. I
think a little more detail might do this some good.
Good job! I really like it.
-- M.B.Author
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