From what I'm guessing.....he died?
Hey there! Lake here for another review, hopefully to keep The Blue Fish in the lead!
So at first I thought that you would rhyme in this poem, but then I realized....it's free verse!
Silly me!XD So, I liked how you wrote about how your cat's life progressed, as each line, seems to express a different meaning. Like the third line, it shows how you thought that he was way too nice and kind to be a stray. I felt as if the cat had had a different family when it was born and it was treated with love and respect that it did that for you too!
I honestly wish I could be with you right now so I could hug you. I feel really bad...like....really bad. But I know that you'll be able to live in peace knowing that he's in peace as well.
I don't have anything to nitpick on because you didn't make any mistakes, and you expressed your words so creatively I have nothing to say!XD
I can't wait to hear more from you friend, maybe in the near future. Keep up the fantastical work friend! I'll talk to you soon.
~ Lake
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