I have a question for myself...
Why did I think it was a good idea to read this well I was hungry?
*Leaves keyboard, and goes to the kitchen**Comes back with cheese crackers*
There we go, now that we have Cheese and Crackers, which are my Bread and Butter, we can start on the review for your poem, Milk and Cookies. XD
You did an absolutely wonderful job making me envision the cookies! (That's probably why I got so hungry afterwards) I've noticed with a lot of the poems I've read by you, you always do an amazing job with descriptive words.
LOL, I love the last line, "Never around long" That is a very true statement.
Really, the only thing I think that could make this poem even better if maybe some figurative language. Other than that, this poem is excellent! Keep on writing, and have a great day!
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