Hey there! I'm here to review your work.
I know this is an older poem of yours, but I really did enjoy it. I can see the beginnings of your current poetry style in it - especially with the imagery you used in the middle two stanzas. As you can tell from my previous reviews, I really love your use of it. It adds a lot to the point that you're trying to make, and also is aesthetically pleasing to read.
I agree with @BlueAfrica's comment on the lack of imagery in the first stanza. I think it's a great start on its own, but it pales in comparison to the two stanzas that follow. If you ever do revise this, I would suggest replicating the kind of imagery you use there.
Speaking of that imagery, I really loved the way you described the different wings. I was expecting the "natural" kind of wings - angel and eagle wings - but I was unprepared for the other kinds you whipped out. It did a great job at showcasing the creativity you mention having in the next stanza.
Great job on this poem, and I can't wait to read more from you!
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