Handwoven

Hi there! I am here to review on your work :3
Now then, I just love how everything rhymes. i don't know-- I just have a thing for rhyming poetry. Sometimes whenever a person writes a rhyming poetry, it tends to confuse readers because the authors use words which are vague but rhymes, which would be a major flaw. However, I completely understood your work. The theme of this was romantic and sweet, describing the unknown girl's beauty and characteristics slowly and professionally. I love how it one of the stanza's the narrator described his desire to fulfill all of the girl's wishes. The romance in the poetry works well with the rhymes and stanzas.
My favourite stanza would be this:

' I think that I'm falling;

Her smile catches me.

Her love is installing,

As large as the sea. '

My heart flutters at this stanza. Describes how good falling in love feels like.
The emotion in it was incredible despite being short. I loved it, saw no flaws, and keep up the good work!

~Brunnera

This is Avalon and I'll be your reviewer for this piece.

Now I do greatly like this it tells a lot in a short time this mainly being romantic so maybe you should change the category to that? Anyhow, one small nick picks I'll hit on real quick and then call it quits for the review. First a disruption in flow

What a surprise,

A smile I see?

I'm so use to cries,

It's no guarantee.

I call this a disruption because to me as I was reading this it had me tripping up thinking it sounded weird. Maybe you could change the wording around to make it sound better perhaps?

This has been your review, have a nice day!