I've been meaning to review this poem for a few days now and I'm finally getting around to it now so apologies!
This poem is written beautifully, and honestly I kind of fell in love with your poetic style the more I read. I love the way the poem is structured, and the all lowercase letters much for a much softer and gentle impact when reading. The imagery in your words is so intense and beautiful it was almost sublime. I hope this poem was is true and written about someone you love because i would swoon so badly if someone wrote something like this about me! There is literal love dropping off of your words in each line and stanza.
Some of my favourite imagery was:
my black hole of a girl
The idea of this 'all-consuming' love the speaker has for her is just so pretty.
AAAA i'm really stumped for words here. You're a fantastic poet!