This is such a good poem. It really vividly explains these feelings, and the parts that are crossed out are really cool cause you can read them both ways and it makes different interpretations of the poem. It's honestly really cool and i would love to read more like this. Also the parts where the words aren't in line,"never a window," "away mutilated secrets," "never held back" are very unique, and this might only make sense to me, but the way the words go downwards adds a sense of falling to those words, and it's really cool. It did take me a minute to figure out how to read them, but that may just be because i'm a little slow lol.
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