Hello there, @LadyBug! Oh, how I love your poems! I am sorry if this review/comment might have errors because I am writing this on my phone hihi. The A/N tells me that you write similarly to how I write as well. It is very fun and interesting to write about specific experiences but, to me, it feels more fun to write something way different from your experience. Because you get to explore different things. This is also very poetic, not gonna lie.
First impressions. This may be a short one but it is good that no matter how short your poem is, you have got to describe great types of emotions and it may seem very poetic that I had to read it twice. But then, I continued reading and I felt sad. You love this person but it feels like she is falling out of love with you. It makes me sad that you want to touch this person but you don't know her anymore. She doesn't want to be with you anymore.
Sad poems with this typewriter font are just so pleasing and beautiful, and lowercase letters. I like poems in lowercase letters because I feel like the writer who leaves it, is like telling people I wrote this naturally without thinking deeper. Maybe because of how I write as well. My brain doesn't compute when I write poems. Overall, it is great. Keep it up!
Have a good day/night! I am joining writing reviews with this race, yay!
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