This was a really nice poem! I feel there were a little to many "Oh Bothers" Which makes it feel repetitive, and at the end, the second to last line was confusing me a bit, but really, other than that, this poems great! I love the format, and I love how it ends where it began, that's really nice!
Overall, great poem! a very enjoyable read, it's fun and funny! Keep on writing, and have a great day or night!
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