Hello!
This poem expresses the draining thoughts of the poet who's totally pissed off by the actions of his/her partner who acts irresponsible towards the actions they've done.
The thing I liked about the poem is that the thoughts are expressed in a free verse and not in some rhythmic style because this style made it much more natural.
The poet doesn't like being the grumpy one all the time, the one who makes the scene. In fact, they didn't like it at all. But alas, they cannot control it and the sole reason is their partner.
Good work mate!
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