Heya, EagleFly, Casanova here to do a review for you.
The biggest thing I have against this, strictly speaking, is the breaking up and wording of the poem as for flow reasons.
You switch by breaking up words into just a few spaces, and honestly I think you could have done better. I read this in my head, and since it didn't sound right to me, I read it allowed, and honestly it's just too broken up for me. Maybe try adding some of it together and adding punctuation wherever it's best for flow. But that could just be me.
The next thing is wording. I feel like you could have found better ways to word things. You Use And to start three sentences, and I feel like that can be taken down to just one. I also feel like the rhyme between be and disagree is too forced, and I wouldn't be worried about rhyme at all, if that was your intent to begin with.
The only other thing is that this is a pretty straightforward poem, it doesn't leave anything to the imagination. Literally- it doesn't take picturing it to get the message, you just have to digest the definitions of the words.
Anyway, I think that's all I have on this one,
Keep on keeping on.
Sincerely, Casanova
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