Young Writers Society

Hi there!

Going to echo everyone else. It was brave sharing your story. It’s not easy putting one’s self out there for potential ridicule and embarrassment. Bravo!

Overall, I am happy you were able to find a good friend who will stand by through thick and thin when the going gets tough.

This is a perfect story to really sink your teeth in and, if you so wanted, expand, adding in the finer details. I sense there was a whole lot more going on than you might be willing to tell. Perhaps, when you are ready?

Thank you for sharing!

Hi there!

Going to echo everyone else. It was brave sharing your story. It’s not easy putting one’s self out there for potential ridicule and embarrassment. Bravo!

Overall, I am happy you were able to find a good friend who will stand by through thick and thin when the going gets tough.

This is a perfect story to really sink your teeth in and, if you so wanted, expand, adding in the finer details. I sense there was a whole lot more going on than you might be willing to tell. Perhaps, when you are ready?

Thank you for sharing!

Hi Bhavya!
You are really brave to share your personal experience. I know board exams in India are an over hyped concept because I myself had gone through all of this stuff. Even these things don't stop after getting into the college as well. If you are not performing well then people start judging you. If one is talented and got great achievements people try to be part of your company and want your friendship. But true friends are those who see beyond these materialistic things.
This 'log kya kahenge'(what will the people say) mentality of our society is where all the problems start and it ends up adding peer pressure to the children. It starts to become a race where everyone wants to be first without even knowing where the finish line is.
There are things we can't share with our parents and we look up to our friends for support. I am really glad you found a true friend in your time of crisis.
You have put your heart in telling this story to everyone. I hope you continue to be this strong person and always have the support of good people around you.
Keep writing!

It's very cool you felt confident enough to share your story, so good for you!

It is difficult to make friends sometimes, but you're right: It definitely is worth it!

I'm really glad you were able to realize that, and find friends that would help and be there for you, I know it can be hard to find people like that and put yourself out there.

All in all a nice(and true) little story, with a very positive message I hope you continue to make good friends!

This must have been hard to share your story like this. I am extremely inspired by your courage and compassion to share. I enjoyed that aspect you showed.

Your language throughout is weak. It could use a lift to give more emotion and some feelings. Readers love when you do that. It isn't as flat. That is just my opinion though. I don't want to offend anyone.

Good job!
~S.M.Locke~

Hey Bhavya, Tanishka here with a review.

First of all, you are very courageous to share your story, Hats off ! You are a good writer and obviously , very expressive. One thing you could work on would be the language, make it a bit more eloquent. That is totally your choice though. Your story inspires me , how you get good things in the end.

Keep on posting such beautiful works,keep writing!