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Do you think I enjoy
being so angry like this
Do you think I like
making a scene
well if those where your thoughts
then your dam wrong
I hate it
in fact I despise it
but I don't have
any control over it anymore
thanks to you
I'm a kicking, screaming,
shouting, angry, stressed void
and your the flippen one
who made this happen
but I know what you're going to do
you're just going to walk away
like a jerk who doesn't care
because that's what you've always done
and I am so dam tired of it!
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Hello!
This poem expresses the draining thoughts of the poet who's totally pissed off by the actions of his/her partner who acts irresponsible towards the actions they've done.
The thing I liked about the poem is that the thoughts are expressed in a free verse and not in some rhythmic style because this style made it much more natural.
The poet doesn't like being the grumpy one all the time, the one who makes the scene. In fact, they didn't like it at all. But alas, they cannot control it and the sole reason is their partner.
Good work mate!
I'm so glad that I got that all across in the poem, I've never really done a poem like this before.
Hello!
This text appears to be a poem or a free verse expressing the speaker's anger and frustration towards someone who has caused them to feel this way. The use of strong language and vivid imagery conveys the intensity of their emotions.
The speaker emphasizes that they do not enjoy being angry or making a scene, but they feel they have lost control over their emotions. They blame the person they are addressing for causing their distress and express frustration with their perceived lack of concern or responsibility.
Overall, theis text conveys a sense of deep emotional turmoil and a desire for the other person to take responsibility for their actions and show genuine care for the speaker's well-being.
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Thanks for the review, I'm glad that I got all of that across in the poem.