Sins

This is the prologue of the story I'm writing. Please review! That night was when the nightmares began. I dreamt I was in Andrea's house, but it was empty. I ...

The Last Night If this is the last night Then I'm going to do it right Either the night will never end Or my heart will never mend The thought ...

It all felt so perfect. But later we lost it. Now life feels so empty. And no one can save me. What's the point in carrying on? When everything I ...

I know that this isn't the best beginning but I would like to know what I could improve. Thank you Home. Home is just a word to me. No meaning ...

That first night went by quite quickly come to think of it. I arrived at Sunset around one o clock, so within a few hours the rest of the kids ...

Part of me was dreading the thought of spending my Saturday in a house full of posh snobs but part of me was surprisingly looking forward to it. When Hayley ...

April 8th, 9:08 Wednesday My bedroom Great. I've just had some wonderful news from the almighty(otherwise known as my dad). We're not going anywhere on holiday this year. I swear ...

April 10th, 11:15 Friday I need my haircut. My fringe is literally down to my chin. I look like one of those chubacka things from Star Wars. I asked mum ...

April 16th, 12:58 Thursday Boys. Something that every teenage girl has to put up with. Except for me. I haven't had a boyfriend in my entire life! Yes, you should ...

April 13th Monday 9:33 Last week I met the angel of hotness(high point of my entire life). I haven't written in here for like four days or something because I've ...

I'm writing this as it is coming into my head so don't expect anything amazing! The second it went into me it stung. It stung badly. I suddenly fell to ...

I know that this poem is a bit 'samey' but I would greatly appreciate your opinions! Longer than Forever Like the moon cannot rise until the sun has set, A ...

This was a random five minute poem so don't expect anything amazing! Enjoy You think you know her Inside a plastic girl, within a plastic shell, Lives a lonely soul ...

Spoiler! : This is for an English assignment. I basically have to write a short script of a scene about anything. I've never even tried to do a script before ...

I really don't know what to call this so I've just called it What I'm looking for. Enjoy! What I'm looking for Every one's telling me that there's no point ...

Do you remember those careless days? when I couldn't wait to see you, But now you've changed in too many ways. Do you remember the things we used to do? ...

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Sorry this took ages guys! I've had loads of exams to revise for. Sigh. Sorry the grmmar's so bad, comma's confuse me April 21st Monday 6:45am Doomsday has arrived. Or ...

This is a chapter of a story I've written, I would just like to know if it's any good. I know that the grammar is awful but try your best ...

I made this up as I was going along, that's why the end is crappy! Taylor Pritchard stared blankly out of the cold window. She watched the glistening raindrops fall ...

I cannot cry, cos my eyes are running dry. I fake a smile to hide the pain, the misery, the hate, But I can't forget it, no matter how hard ...

Now this is what I call random. I was on a road trip and I got seriously bored, I mean seriously bored. I was suffering from lack of imagination and ...

May 4th, 8:03 Saturday Reading a magazine Is it just me or does Miley Cyrus have gigantic teeth? I'm looking at a picture of her and I swear her teeth ...

I was in a strange mood when I wrote this Love is... Love is the one you endlessly dream about. Love is the one you smile at every day. Love ...

I feel that this is an important subject so I've tried to write about it. I would appreciate reviews! Tears are running dry Thousands of lives rest on a single ...

This is a small section of one of the chapters of the story. I'll clear things up a bit One neighbourhood is poor and the other is rich. The two ...

I have posted a random section of this story and people have asked me to post the whole thing so I've decided to post the first chapter. Rip this to ...

This poem seems a bit 'off' to me but I can't really put my finger on what exactly Please help! My big brother You showed me the things I wanted ...

This story seriously needs help and I would appreciate any help that it does get! You will be able to tell as you read on, that writing is definetely not ...

Hey, I haven't been on YWS in ages! I was never much of a writer and I'm even worse now! Anyway, critiques are greatly thanked Meg xoxox Just give it ...

Spoiler! : I'm not sure whether this should be the prologue or the first chapter... what do you guys think? I was seven years old when I first met my ...

Once again, this is a rough draft! This one I am really not too sure about at all, especially compared to the first chapter. I always struggle with the beginning ...

As some of you guys are already aware, I am offensively terrible at edits. This is one of my attempts. I am fully aware that I have serious dialogue punctuation ...

I didn't like my original chapter two of this, so I changed it completely... I'm not too keen on this one either, to be perfectly honest! I really, genuinely struggle ...

There's a few parodies around, so I thought I'd try one. It's a Lady GaGa, Bad Romance parody. I didn't do the whole song, because the whole song is, like, ...

I wasn't actually going to do a part two of this, but the I realised that the first part was really short! It might seem a bit rushed because... well, ...

Okay! Just to warn you, this is pretty long. I think it is anyway!I've been pretty happy with my last few chapters, but this one... not so happy. I'm painfully ...

I was looking around my portfolio the other day and I found something that I'd completely forgotten about. It was a piece that I'd written, like, the month I joined ...

I'm really not too keen on this chapter... it's definitely my least favourite so far To be honest, it just feels a bit bland and pointless, I think. It might ...

Like usual... I'm not too sure about this... it seems 'off' Also, I think this is going to be the last chapter I post of this on YWS. I don't ...

A Shot of Arrogance ~ Chapter OneThe official page thingy for A Shot of Arrogance. Join and you get a monkey. “The important thing about a problem is not its ...

Yeah... I don't really like this part The next part's more interesting though. I didn't want to post the entire chapter in one post because it would have been a ...

This is going to be the last part of this novel that I put on YWS, I don't want to end up posting the entire thing on here now, do ...

Okay... I wasn't going to post anymore of this, but this chapter is bugging me. Surprise, surprise! I'm going to warn you in advance, this part isn't very eventful, but ...

This is a pretty short part, but I really need some help on it. It's quite an important part of the novel so I need to make sure that it's ...

CYSM.jpg Spoiler! : This is the rough beginning of my new "project". I've just finished my previous novel, and because it's me, I'm writing a new one after a couple ...

Spoiler! : After an awful lot of rewrites, I've managed to write the first chapter of this. It needs some help though... There are a couple of things in this ...