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She's beautiful, I remarkI'm the black pieces, bold and brave and dashing,She's the charming glass, glistening, beautiful, smart.Our pawns meet at the halfway line:And it's like, “Hey there, how are

Her pretty dress was read: I'm an Angel! And had a sparkling fairy.Her face was stoic and solemn yet cute, despite the grime and dirt, despite the mudstains.Very cute. Even ...

Poet's Note: There was a shower over my head as the shampoo was being washed away. Naturally I couldn't open my eyes without screaming my lungs out, so I was ...

There are three versions to this. The one that's up is what I'd like to be review. My other two are earlier variations (One which EB and Crescent agreed wasn't ...

Fly OnWhen Life takes its spin,When pain and grief duel it out for your heartWhen the sun hides behind the moonAnd when push shoves you down into black...We'll fly on, ...

The sun set in the western blue, Bidding farewell to the pink huesIn the park, a couple dancedOh what songs they was a beautiful day, to go for a swim,For ...

In the News Today:In the News today,A baby was born,Smiled his first smile,And his giggle made the doctor grinTemperature's are high,So two kids ran around a pool,One fell in, The ...

GravityVerse 1:Every time our eyes make contact,Secret messages convey,Our feelings and emotions so dense,There's gravityChorus 1Gravity, there's gravity...Gravity, there's___ gravity.Verse 2:Every ti

PebblesVerse 1:Sitting here on a broken road,In the ashes of flames from long ago,I watch a blazin' sunof the afternoon,Say goodnight__And when the light's gone,I'll sing a new song,Pick my ...

Dancing on KryptoniteVerse 1:Everything moves,Turns round and round,So let's dance,Fly off the ground,Away from trouble,We'll find a cure,But in the meantime,You can be so sure...(Chorus)We're dancing

Okay, thanks guys, editted. It was meant to be 'add'. Sorry, bad mistake. Thanks for your reviews.Five Boys and their ManagerFive boys and their manager,Don't know why the world can't ...

FatherThe hearth's crackle,Its glow on the wall,The TV bellowing,“Oh! What football!”The Fall all around meFather.Father brought me this.Father loves his boy,The muted boy – ChrisMy name is Chri

I can see this crystal clear lake,Like a tear from God's Own Eye,I can feel this chilling wind,Like Adam's first breath,The flowers smell like orange blossom,Eve's sweet scented perfumes,And the ...

*Being Editted to be Less Offensive & Thanks for all the reviews! Until then!*

Dear friend,You say that your life is tough,You ramble on in stanzas,And break down in song,And at the banshee's midnight cry,You sit awake and draw out a long prayer for ...

Dear New MemberDear New Member,Please live up to my expectations,I'm packing up and going elsewhere,Leaving a vacancy for you to fill,So when you write your poems,Remember to punctuate adequately,Don'

The AwakeningIn the dark tomb,There is but one sound,Duhduh, buhduh,Of a heartbeatThen the blood begins to flow,His breath quickens, He's hyperventilating,Cold sweat beads his forehead,Memories flood

Spoken/Written in Chat:User 1: Man, I love YWSUser 2: Awe-inspiring huh?User 1: I could break out into song!I love what's young about it,I love the craziness!I love the antics!And all ...

The air is toxic,My skin burns,Pin-pricks of stars are stuck to my arms,They boil my blood,My breathing is slow,Here comes the Crazy!There goes the Crazy!Leaving us with a message,That we ...

Simple letters, Giggles, spring flowers, Burning sun – share an umbrella, After church a picnic, Holding hands, Whispers, spotlight dance, Perfect atmosphere – share a first kiss, And afte

Brave OnBrave on my soldier,Surely, I will never ruffle your hair again,I love you,Too much to say,A thousand lessons left to instill,No time,A thousand blessings left to envoke,Billy gazes at ...

A Compilation - What do you think? ---------------------------- I Shall Race Thee Let not a day of childhood go by, In which I did not run my heart out, Let ...

A Sunrise for GodThe ocean gently overlaps itself,Eternal, warm Indian Ocean,It is a humid Christmas,And I'm painting,God's gift.There is nothing He loves more,(Oh I can hear Him laughing)As my gentle

Her piercing cries once filled the African night,And her teardrops wet the dry ground,But hardened hearts don't listen,And so.He fought and kicked and has the scars to show it,Yet he's ...

Spoiler! : The key line for this poem was inspired by the same line in Daughtry's What About Now. However the real inspiration for the poem is Christ and the ...

Our rollercoaster peaks,On this New Year's Eve.The fireworks light up the gloomy clouds.The midnight sun is pink and purple.Stay with me in this moment,Before the first red breaks,And the blue ...

Spoiler! : Meant to be some kind of Christian affirmation poem or something. I'm struggling to expand it... tips? Struggling to imagine an ending 'ey darkness,And trouble,Prisoner's warden:I'm sti

Perplexed Spoiler! : Being Edited: Special Thanks to Kamas ---------------------Draft so far---------------------The Day turns to dusk,And the dust fills the air,As the people go to their houses,From

Spoiler! : Thanks to the reviews, greatly appreciated and noted. Greater editing to come later. Yes, Vanity of Vanities----I can see clearly now,that the world is a twisted place,Melancholy colours ...

A kind of hither-thither whisperSpreads across the yellow-brown veld.Perfection stares me in the face,Or rather, it wells up inside of meAs the sun burns the grass a bolder gold.And somewhere ...

"From Here On Out, I Fly"The veld looks so still,Even as the winds serpent, viper and python.But the storm is behind me, and Hell before.The dark abyss of dreary souls ...