Topics
-

I'd appreciate some constructive criticism. I know it needs work, but I don't know how to fix it. A…Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:08 am -

When they said, I couldn't control my feelings, I said, "Watch me." I'm still going at it, Yes, eve…Sat Mar 18, 2006 11:53 am -

Some people are so strange Some people are just derange But when I look at you I see right through …Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:43 pm -

This type of poem is called a Tanka. I just learned about it, and started working with it (format i…Thu Mar 16, 2006 2:03 am -

Verses: Never have I felt so beautiful with you, never With you I feel so right, so pure in your si…Thu Mar 16, 2006 1:52 am -

Edited by the uberly awesome Calleeey! =3 Dance, american girl, dance on the crazy beat. Pour your …Tue Mar 14, 2006 4:06 am -

I'd make you my writing if only i could, Dear to me no matter how good. The happy ending of my huge…Mon Mar 13, 2006 10:12 pm -
Chocolate is a... Delectable delight indeed, with such a rich flavor it seduces me, i can indulge i…Mon Mar 13, 2006 9:57 pm -

I think this is the right rating... all comments, crits, suggestions welcome. CL m.a.l.a.i.s.e -I a…Sun Mar 12, 2006 2:47 pm -

Lounge Singer i wanna be a coffee coloured brown speakeasy angel waitin for her godfather-goodfella…Sun Mar 12, 2006 1:25 pm -

I look at her and stare; deep into her eyes Eyes, deep and thoughtful like deep, brown tidal pools …Sun Mar 12, 2006 11:55 am -

This is about the simplest poem in my whole book, but hey! I like it... ~*~ 13 ~*~ Today I wanna fe…Fri Mar 10, 2006 10:08 pm -
Poem about poetry Poem, oh Poem! This is my ode to thee Poem of poem Making meer words into a symph…Fri Mar 10, 2006 10:03 pm -

Catch the moon. Reach for the stars. Leap for a sunbeam in pools of darkness. Your dreams can come …Thu Mar 09, 2006 8:38 pm -

I sit here confused, Im lost in an empty room. Nothing is around me, but windowless walls. I cant s…Wed Mar 08, 2006 4:38 pm -
Crying blood forget Painful joy Anger Bleed till desire Shadowing my face from reality Take a knife…Wed Mar 08, 2006 4:37 am -

Wiil I be good enough ? I wonder every day. Could my life be perfect, as I wish it could? Would I g…Tue Mar 07, 2006 4:32 pm -

~*~ Second Chances ~*~ Lacking the will to maintain the pain Of loneliness, amorphous memories rema…Tue Mar 07, 2006 2:48 pm -

I guess I came up with this one after meeting those seemingly flawless women who tear down everyone…Tue Mar 07, 2006 2:41 pm -

I've never really written poetry before, I tried my hand at it in year 8, everyone thought it wasnt…Sun Mar 05, 2006 10:12 am -

If the answer is no, can I change your mind?" This quote so simply fits me. Here's the truth: It hu…Sun Mar 05, 2006 7:49 am -

Sick Day 3-3-06 Sometimes, I celebrated so long, called to the heavens so loudly, and danced so fer…Sat Mar 04, 2006 8:19 pm -

You hurt me; I couldn't stand it.... I wanted to hear you but the truth wasn't true; Or maybe it wa…Fri Mar 03, 2006 2:37 pm -

My grandfather isn't doing very well right now, and it's hit harder than I expected it to. This poe…Fri Mar 03, 2006 1:32 am -
There is a treasure, Such as no other. With something inside That cannot be measured... Emralds of …Fri Mar 03, 2006 1:29 am -

Bloodshot eyes cracking open, From severe lack of sleep, I cannot think for the life of me, And I m…Thu Mar 02, 2006 11:57 am -
I wrote this last year, but I thought I'd post it to give everyone an idea of what kind of poet I a…Thu Mar 02, 2006 2:40 am -

Stars hang in the sky, Like pearls on a drop-necklace; A coronet moon.Tue Feb 28, 2006 1:50 pm -
OK, first off, it's that name poem... Letters of the name are the first letters. Secondly, I'm not …Tue Feb 28, 2006 5:00 am -

Time is ticking away; I watch as you pull out and drive away I’ve begged for you not to leave, but …Sun Feb 26, 2006 10:54 pm -
The suicide speaks My time is comming... I can't take it anymore! The pain, the mysery, the agony t…Sat Feb 25, 2006 7:26 pm -

EDIT II : Happy now Bob? :D Take this for what you will, about your siggy, the only reason I watch …Thu Feb 23, 2006 11:51 pm -

Look, Stop, Right there behind you. Can't you see you're not wanted here? An unwelcome stranger, Cr…Wed Feb 22, 2006 11:15 pm -

Love Life Express yourself, Make time to laugh. Create positive energy. Control your destiny! Take …Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:14 pm -

Okay, I did this in a bit of a rush so go easy on me... it sounds better if you say it aloud though…Wed Feb 22, 2006 2:53 am -

...Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:37 pm -
Loneliness comes in a wave of tears, With broken hopes, and isolated fears, where sadness treads, f…Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:30 pm -

Look out into the world and smile Dive into great oceans worry free, Run along the never ending roa…Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:29 pm -
This has to be one of the most crappiest and filthiest things I have ever written. Not dirty, but j…Sun Feb 19, 2006 2:57 am -

So here I am! Take it or leave it, I bear all (My sin and joy). Honesty comes But once in a relatio…Fri Feb 17, 2006 3:40 am -

Whispered goodbyes Unanswered questions The hope inside of me ready to kick in Covering my heart up…Wed Feb 15, 2006 5:32 pm -

Too many emotions for words My mind become muddled A Unicorn in human form The man who captured my …Sun Feb 12, 2006 6:54 am -

Everything is perfect but i'm still sad, He holds me and hugs me but i'm still mad. It's the middle…Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:48 am -
She asked once, "what is left if tomorrow is today?" "what is life if there's no change?" Well I ju…Sat Feb 11, 2006 2:34 pm -

I fell in love with a picture of you Strands of hair befall your brow And your eyes look upon anoth…Sat Feb 11, 2006 1:32 pm -

i usually wouldn't post a piece i did for school, but i thought this was pretty good, so i am. i ha…Fri Feb 10, 2006 2:32 pm -
I am me I am who I am That’s all I can be The person who runs my life is me I’m no queen of Siam Or…Thu Feb 09, 2006 11:13 pm -

Pillowcase Dog i went to your house last night and i met your dog i was lying on top of him, for qu…Thu Feb 09, 2006 7:23 am -

i no its gonna be small and some may think its stupid but its my poem so oh well [b][i]Hey you yes …Thu Feb 09, 2006 12:55 am -

This is a poem I came up with on year when all my friends seemed to reject then i remembered that J…Wed Feb 08, 2006 6:52 pm
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest
