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I was disappointed with this poem when I wrote it months ago. But reading it again tonight made me …Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:14 am -
Solid granite presses against my back as I look up to the sky back and forth my hand moves unable t…Tue Nov 15, 2005 4:30 pm -
clockwork I wish I could see the inner workings of your mind you claim to have misplaced me behind …Tue Nov 15, 2005 4:30 pm -
I'm really not sure about this one, so any constructive criticism would be more than welcome. Light…Mon Nov 14, 2005 7:09 pm -
Cut my skin with your razor blade Cut me from behind because your sun doesn't shine Take away from …Sun Nov 13, 2005 7:09 pm -
It Would Be Wise to Think First When, by a condescending statement You decide to unveil a hidden As…Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:31 am -
any kind of constructive criticism would really help, also anyone got any ideas for a title? Day's …Sun Nov 13, 2005 4:23 am -
This is in the same vein as my other poem, Gaol, though hopefully this one will get more feedback! …Sat Nov 12, 2005 12:53 pm -
Please, tell me that somebody's out there And that my cries do not go unheard Because my voice is g…Fri Nov 11, 2005 10:32 am -
Locked Lord, Let It RainLord, let it rain. Let it rain upon my tearful face So both our tears can slide together And become…Fri Nov 11, 2005 6:08 am -
OK, now it's in the right place I hope! A Shortcut To The Sea The velvet-soft Quiet Of Night. My sk…Fri Nov 11, 2005 12:26 am -
i watch as you lick your lips wet and take a drag from your cigarette that filthy habit that disgus…Tue Nov 08, 2005 10:56 pm -
silence and words part playing hide and seek in the dark it’s your surprise i litter you with that …Tue Nov 08, 2005 7:19 am -
Fifty dollar notes pile underneath my desk and i don't know where they originated. Oh poorlittleric…Mon Nov 07, 2005 9:16 am -
lighting never strikes twice (this) left me wondering why genius strikes ligting quick with all the…Sun Nov 06, 2005 8:07 pm -
In the moment of grief I was numb to the pain Running deep to the core of my being. Now the ache of…Sun Nov 06, 2005 12:24 am -
Grey clouds stretch From horizon to horizon, Lowering my heart, Dampening my dreams, An inescapable…Thu Nov 03, 2005 9:49 pm -
Lost in my thoughts, Fighting, searching. Long have I sought, for a way of loving. No matter how I …Tue Nov 01, 2005 1:52 am -
I know we're not supposed to preface our work, but I'm going to. The spacing in this is fairly impo…Tue Nov 01, 2005 1:31 am -
Memories abound In every crevice and under every rock In the trickle of the water and the setting o…Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:20 pm
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Dawn of creation The clouds roared, wind cried. The moon glistened, and sun sighed. Earth enforced …Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:42 pm -
To love Every morning breaks through the fans, Of the palms quiet groves. The seaside fishermen ret…Sat Oct 29, 2005 1:48 pm -
(Ok, I hope this is in the right thread...it's just a bit of a poem...not too good :?) Life is a wi…Fri Oct 28, 2005 5:19 am -
I can't believe my eyes, Have i decieved my own self once again in believing i know what's best for…Fri Oct 28, 2005 3:22 am -
A crow blinked . Opals. Eyes snap shut in a white flash, Open. I am gone.Thu Oct 27, 2005 3:35 pm -
Remember that night, You carved your anger into your chest, And darling, I hated you for it, But I …Wed Oct 26, 2005 9:05 pm -
for years I've been crying into a pillow full of goosedown the mantra of ghostkisses and spiderflys…Sun Oct 23, 2005 1:59 pm -
"The View From My Window is of the Roof" 10/19/05 The view from my window is of the roof each tile …Sun Oct 23, 2005 1:53 pm -
Our hymn couldn’t have been sung better On a Tuesday For it was an afternoon Where the sunlight daz…Sun Oct 23, 2005 1:51 pm -
Lead me into a curtained off, hidden corner (Or maybe it is I who leads you,) Hold my lips, and don…Sun Oct 23, 2005 1:43 pm
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"To Rend This Tattered Heart" Your hand casually touches my breast, cupping it in your palm Willing…Thu Oct 20, 2005 5:28 am -
Your name Will forever be for me Love, and pain And so many unfathomable emotions Tumbling together…Thu Oct 20, 2005 4:06 am
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In a world where these word Are just sounds Like a desperate plea From a woman Who had just lost he…Thu Oct 20, 2005 4:03 am -
I wanted to write Something deep and profound To take me and my life And my pen and just write I wa…Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:14 am -
Daydreams and distant memories Whisk my heart in light so sweet. Take me by the hand, Feel your toe…Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:04 am -
From earth to paradise... On the beauty of the road, I mused, with metre of the wheel’s note. Over …Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:02 am -
As usual, I don't know where to put this - but somehow this poem made it into the Teen Literary Ant…Tue Oct 18, 2005 7:07 am -
Far too long I lived a lie Believing in whatever was served to me Denying what I pleased Now, I kno…Mon Oct 17, 2005 5:18 pm -
Distance Through the dusk, I stared Gazed through the dawn. Through the night I whispered Murmured …Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:44 pm -
Mythical moon Numbness transcends the animate To enjoy the luxury of the stellar world. Rarely but …Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:28 pm -
It's been a long, narrow pathway. I've had to drag colossal shadoes and gigantic blocks of tin. And…Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:11 am -
Poem, a mear word, a fragmentation, Of the wonderful feeling, the sensation, Of writing thoughts, t…Fri Oct 14, 2005 5:47 am -
"Indiscretion" I’ve come to accept the way the sparkle of the ring on my finger catches your eye. T…Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:41 am -
Riddles to Forget Me By About to cry, you choke it. Ready to speak, you sip it. Wanting me, you suc…Tue Oct 11, 2005 6:22 pm -
I paged back through my diary And saw your name on every page, Remembered things I’d buried long ag…Tue Oct 11, 2005 6:02 am
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sakura And, Now Ladies and Gentelmen Death has come The Black Pariah of crackling ashes, rolling cl…Sat Oct 08, 2005 10:40 pm -
Soft soothing voices and acoustic guitars, Lamenting the moon above, although we're higher, Laughin…Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:30 pm -
please, take out my heart, and replace it with an empty chest cavity. i would rather not feel anyth…Tue Oct 04, 2005 5:05 pm -
[pre]Beyond the cities with no names and beyond the trees that tangle me so beyond the roots that i…Tue Oct 04, 2005 5:32 am -
when things turn negative.. when mood turns low.. i often think of those around me.. one by one.. b…Mon Oct 03, 2005 7:28 am
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