Oh great! You just gave me a craving! And I am giving up chocolate for Lent!!!!! Now I will have to give up something else! HEhehe jk ! Keep up the good work!
Out flew the web, and floated wide, The mirror cracked from side to side. 'The curse has come upon me' cried The Lady of Shalott
I have to agree with Amice with the "envelops my heart with a bountiful love". But I still have a great passion for chocolate. Thanka alot!! you gave me a craving for chocolate!! ANd i don't have any.
Seriously, those two lines could be sold to a chocolateer. They are the stuff ads are made of... very lovely and very catchy.
This is a cute little poem. The subject of chocolate is one generally agreed upon. Nice and simple.
The problem I have with this is your division of lines. You often have a line break in a seemingly random spot and then a comma in the middle of the line dividing the thoughts. If you did this in order to accent something it would be okay. But, I don't see any of that coming out. I would suggest it split more like this.
Chocolate is a...
Delectable delight indeed. Note: I really like this alliteration here! With such a rich flavor, it seduces me.
I can indulge in it all day, and every day
The aroma entrances me
and envelops my heart
with a bountiful love.
Chocolate is the food of admiration,
the sweet symbol of elation,
and the remedy for desolation. Splitting this section in particular makes your scheme of "ation"s pop even more.
I read it again, and I have to agree with *singsoffkey*. Those two lines could be sold to Dove or Hershey's or Godiva or See's... Oh gravy... I soo need chocolate now...
*wanders off*
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"Most of us have far more courage than we ever dreamed we possessed."
- Dale Carnegie
I have to say this is my favorite poem because I LOVE CHOCOLATE!!! and apperantly im not alone...YAY for chocolate. I do like the big words to describe this chocolaty wounder!!
jk ! Keep up the good work! 
ANd i don't have any.
