Chocolate

Chocolate is a...

Delectable delight indeed, with such a rich flavor
it seduces me, i can indulge in it all day and every
day, the aroma entrances me and envelops my heart
with a bountiful love.

Chocolate is the food of admiration, the sweet
symbol of elation and the remedy for desolation.

I love chocolate

.... And you're 17 years old?
Whoa... I never thought of chocolate with such big words.
Chocolate is simple
Chocolate is kind
It's the real type o' chocolate
That I cannot find...

But wow, you write just like one of my friends... who hasn't spoken to me in nearly a year... wow.... (Ryan Romalle WHY!?)

Thanks for your positive reaction.

XD

Nice and cute. Chocolate is indeed wonderful, eh?

sorry u need 2 work on it a bit dosnt suit your age i expect this from the likes of 13 year olds gud luck nxt time

short but sweet i think his portrayed eating choc pretty well .. i think its quite a hard subject 2 be creative bout cos its such a basic action but i think his pulled it off quite well so nice 1 m8 keep at it

I like it! Chocolate is meant to be written about...

Good Job!

So do I,I love chocolate.Yummy!!
Nice one.

](*,) d'oh that got me thinking about chocolate and i don't have any

Whoo..... I LOVE CHOCOLATE!

The line-breaking doesn't make much sense.

I want chocolate.

This does chocalate justice.

The last stanza is so poetic... You should totally sell that to some sophisticated chocalate company to print on their wrappers.

envelops my heart with a bountiful love.

IMO, this is going a little overboard.
The rest I enjoyed!
Would you happen to have anything creative on, say, lettuce sandwiches?

Chocolate... Everyone should write something about chocolate.

I know chocolate has gotten me through more than one tough day. *sniffles* I owe it so much.

I love chocolate...


Good poem, by the way.