This isn't typically my kind of poem, but you wrote it so well that it didn't bother me at all. Actually, I quite like it. After scratching my head and reviewing each line, I am saddened to say that I cannot find anything I need to critique. It flows really well; this is one of those poems that could be recited out loud and sound 20 times better than it looks on paper.
In any case, best wishes, and keep writing! xx
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