I live in Scotland and I don't know very much on the shutdown in America, I do know a little however. So for me this poem hasn't hit me very hard at all. I'm sure many people from the USA will find deeper meaning in your poem than myself. Having said that I did enjoy the poem and felt it was a good portrayal of society as a whole.
Anyone who believes infants can run a country
Has obviously never seen one when it's hungry.
For me this was one of the best lines in the poem. I felt that it was written rather smartly and did have a very good effect on the poem. All in all I cannot really say much that hasn't already been said.
I did enjoy it and could feel the emotion behind it. Great job!
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