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I couldn’t see Agar anywhere. Perhaps he’d swam away in fear at the sight of the dragon? For a few moments I swam in circles, letting all the lizard’s slime and saliva slide off of my body. Once I felt sufficiently clean, I swam towards the sea’s surface till my head popped above its waves. I was facing the cove, some yards away. I spun around till I could make out a distant shore. Hoping it was the same one where I’d last seen Iyagi, I dove beneath the sea and began swimming towards it.
Agar had already swam off before you even met the dragon, so I have a feeling he knew about the dragon and just didn't want to meet him.
Oh yuck! That's so gross.
I forgot about poor Iyagi, the poor guy must be worried sick, I do hope he hasn't done anything silly. I also hope he is still on the beach.
I really and to be Kkachi, being able to breath under water must so so cool!
Without a kelpie’s powerful tail, the distance seemed to stretch on and on. What had felt but minutes with Agar, stretched into hours. I had to take several breaks, breathing in and out large bubbles as I stared at schools of fish passing by. They teased me with their speedy, little fins. I stuck out my tongue at quite a few that seemed to taunt me with their fishy grins. Then I’d kick my pitiful human feet, mustering as much dignity as I could as I swam away.
XD poor thing, maybe she should go to the surface and use her arms to wade through the water, that's always faster than doing it completely submerged.
Hahaha, fishy grins, I didn't know fish could smile.
Finally, I reached shallower water. Though my head was still underwater, I let my body sink to the sea’s floor till my toes dug gratefully in the sand. From there I walked, the floor rising higher and higher uphill. As I slowly made my way closer to land, my head poked through the sea’s surface, then my shoulders. Like coming out of a bath, I stepped out of one of the Quanxi’s four seas.
Aahhh wonderful description here! It really forms a wonderful image in once head.
I also congratulate her for being able to walk with out falling over from being over tired. I wouldn't be able to swim as far as she did and still make it onto the beach.
Iyagi was lying on his back on a turf of grass nearest to the shore, but farther away from the water. One arm was draped over his eyes, and his chest was rising and falling steadily. He looked to be sleeping. A sigh of relief escaped me and a smile crept across my lips.
Well at least we know he didn't do anything silly and remained on the beach. Though I'm not sure how he could be sleeping? Isn't he worried? If I was in his place I would be pacing back and forth.
Iyagi as all chilled about it. XD
Silently, I crept ever closer to the sleeping prince till I stood directly above him. Kneeling down, I carefully raised his arm up and over his eyes, laying it gently by his side. He didn’t move a muscle but kept right on dreaming. His dream must have been a happy one for a calm, peaceful expression rested on his face. I couldn’t help but stare. In all our time living under the same roof, I had never seen Iyagi sleep save that one time he’d been poisoned. But that time his features had been scrunched in pain.
For a moment there I thought she as going to be evil and scare him, oh well.
She better be careful not to get water on him if she wants him to remain a sleep.
I had forgotten about him being poisoned, gosh yeah that was a scary chapter now that I remember.
I leaned in to get a closer look. I had never noticed that his lashes were quite so long. They rested softly on his lids, creating little shadows that brushed across his face. The prince’s skin had always been rather dark from all his time spent in the sun training. However, this close I could make out tiny freckles speckling all over Iyagi’s nose and cheeks. A strong compulsion to trace them with one finger came over me.
XD This girl is so in love! Confess already. I'm sure he likes you too. She better be careful don't want him waking up and catching her stair at him. Lol now that will be funny.
Just as I reached forward, the prince opened his eyes sleepily. He stared into mine for a minute before whispering, “Are you a mermaid?”
I couldn’t help but chuckle. “No,” I laughed, “I’m an old friend.”
Iyagi sat up in a rush. His hand reached out and cupped my cheek. “Kkachi?” he asked softly, “It’s really you?”
My hand automatically reached up to cover his. “Yes,” I breathed, “It’s me.” My heart began pounding hard in my chest.
Aww!!! A cute little moment there! I love parts like this!
His hand dropped and he inched closer, before pulling me into a warm hug. “I thought I’d never see you again,” he murmured into my ear, “I was so worried!” The prince pulled away but still held onto my arms. “Do you know where we are?”
Dude you were asleep a second ago, I don't think you can call that worried. *sigh* Oh well at least he cares.
Just then the prince lifted my arm and tore back my sleeve. “How’d you get this?” He demanded, his voice stern and full of concern. A cut stretched itself across the length of my arm from my wrist to halfway up my elbow. Dried blood flaked across my skin, painting my arm like a red snake.
How did he know that was there? Was there blood on her sleeve?
It was only when the prince sat back, that I realized my cheeks were feeling a sudden heat and I found it difficult to look in Iyagi’s eyes, so full of concern and another emotion that I hoped lay there.
Aww!! Iyagi is very caring! There is love in the air. Lol
I only woke once more when I felt warmth embrace me. My last thought was how comforting it felt before I fell into a peaceful slumber.
And a cute moment to end the chapter on!
I really liked this chapter a lot! I got to see a different side to Iyagi and it was a lot of fun to see them be all shy around one another and still be all caring.
I also love your descriptions, their really touching and get your story moving!
You should be very happy with this!
I'm heading onto the last chapter now, I do hope you will post more soon! Have a great day or night and stay warm!
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