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Emperor's Heir - Chapter 34

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Chapter 34

I gulped. “Um, hello?” I squeaked.

Didn’t think I’d have the pleasure of seeing you so soon.” The dragon bent his head and peaked at me with one eye.

I’m sorry,” I apologized, “But have we met?”

The dragon chuckled deeply causing his belly to shake the ground and make me bounce. “You were but a wee babe. However, I knew one day our paths would cross again.

Really?” I asked, at loss for any other words.

Of course, with a destiny such as yours, I knew one day we would meet again.

My … destiny?” I repeated breathlessly, puzzled.

Well, as far as I can see, your future remains blurred. It appears that eventually you will come to a crossroads,” the dragon squinted at the walls, as if seeing something past them, Nevertheless, no matter which path you take, your actions will impact generations to come, marking your name in history.

I breathed a small sigh of relief. Though the giant lizard’s words puzzled me, I realized that the beast did not appear to have any intention to eat me. I started to stand, propping myself against the wall as my shaking legs could not support my entire weight as of yet.

So, you can see the future?” I asked curiously.

Only glimpses of what might be.” The dragon answered.

Do you know if I will get my memories back?” I hung my head. “If I will remember my mother?”

The dragon raised his head, pulling away from me. “Your obsession with regaining knowledge of your past could bring about your own downfall.

I frowned. “How can that be? All I want is to remember the woman who raised me. A child longs to be with their parents, even if they are dead. How can that desire be evil?”

Ah, but the memory of your lost mother is tied with yet more painful memories.” The dragon grinned sneakily. “These, once unlocked have the potential to unlock a darkness that lies deep within the core of your very heart.

I rubbed my hand across my forehead, suddenly feeling a strong headache. “What do you mean?” I asked in a whisper, doubts filling my mind.

It amuses me,” The dragon bent his head, gazing down at me, “How little a person can know about oneself. You humans are the creatures least in tune with your own potential. Surely, you’ve felt it.” The dragon’s voice dipped into a low, hushed tone. “That power coursing through your veins has been growing stronger since the day of your return to Quanxi. And you may want to deny it, but there’s a danger that you revel in. You’ve often sought it in your miserable life.

You know about my friends?” I asked, surprised, “About how my time with them in the Capitol?”

Establishing justice,” the giant lizard spat, as if the word disgusted him, “Yes, I know … Protector.

I frowned. “You don’t approve?” I asked.

The dragon yawned. “Predictability bores me. So far you have struggled to be a hero, a savior to your people. But that may change. And I am looking forward to watching your journey.

My eyes widened in horror. “Are you saying that I could become a villain?” The dragon smirked and nodded. I gulped, “I will eventually be blinded by my own greed and pride?” The very idea made my stomach twist and turn till I began to feel sick.

Not greed. Nor pride.” The dragon lowered his head till he was staring deep into my eyes. “Revenge.” He hissed.

Revenge? For what?” I asked, desperate to know the answer and how to stop it.

The dragon shook his giant head slowly. “That remains to be seen. The future is as unclear as your past. But I do know that one day our paths will cross again. And you will be searching for my help.

I crossed my arms stubbornly. “Why would I come to you? You don’t have any answers now, and are only giving me more questions. Besides, you don’t seem to be for the cause of good.” I paused and frowned. “And I’m not sure if you are even evil. Which side would you choose?”

The dragon lifted his head and grinned. “Quite observant you are, little one. I’m for neither side. I like to be amused and will aide whichever side I feel compelled to. Or never.” He lay back down, curling in like a snake. “As you can see, I’m quite busy.

I scoffed, “Quite.” I glanced around. “You wouldn’t, by any chance, know if there is anything here that will help the kelpies?”

The dragon raised a hairless brow and squinted at me. “Ah! You’re helping them so that they will help you. How noble.” He grinned a sarcastic, toothy smile. “Yes, I know of a way.

I did not like the look that crossed the lizard’s eyes. “Oh?” I replied cautiously.

The dragon smirked. “But you’d have to trust me.

I shook my head. “That will be hard,” I admitted.

I know.” My hesitancy didn’t seem to disturb the dragon at all. In fact, it appeared to increase his amusement.

I straightened. “What must I do … besides trust you?”

Step into my mouth.

What?!” I gasped.

You need the past prince’s memories?” I nodded. “He gave them to me. However, the merman sealed my mouth to secrecy. Only someone brave enough to step into my mouth will have access to the memories stored within.” The dragon squinted at me. “But you don’t even know this prince’s name, do you?

I shook my head shamefully. “I do not. I forgot to ask Agar. He isn’t exactly someone easy to get along with,” I admitted. Then I raised my brows in surprise, realizing something else. “Hey, I don’t even know your name!”

The dragon’s toothy smile widened evermore. “It’s one I do not give out easily. I may tell you. But only if you prove yourself to me.

I quirked a brow. “I was only trying to be polite,” I stated, “I don’t need to know if you are not willing.”

The giant lizard smiled toothily. “Oh, little one… you’ve much to learn. A dragon’s name is never a trivial thing. Whoever possesses knowledge of it, possesses the power to summon it’s owner.” The beast paused and tilted his head in thought. “I can recall, in the span of my entire lifetime, only giving my name to two people. And they are both dead now.

How did they die?” I asked in a whisper.

The dragon quirked a scaly brow. “Not sure. I may have eaten one. Irritating little fool he was. Cheated me out of my name with all his chatter.” My brows flew in surprise. “But doesn’t matter. Are you going to just stand here in this cave forever, or make a decision child?

The giant lizard’s hot breath hit me in the face, as much as his question made my knees tremble. The dragon’s mouth looked like a fiery furnace, burning bright with each word he spoke. I wasn’t sure if I would survive.

So, I asked. “Won’t I … uh … burn if I get into your mouth?”

The beast shrugged. “Not sure. No one has chanced it before.

I scowled and muttered, “Not very helpful,” beneath my breath. I closed my eyes and recalled all that I had ever been told that described my mother.

I remembered how my heart had quickened when my Father had told me I reminded him of her; of how Nalda’s fingers ran through my hair saying it was just like hers; how her own loving words written in that letter had caressed my mind like a soft, tender kiss. I focused on the empty hole in my heart, the heaviness that lay in the pit of my stomach like a heavy stone.

Opening my eyes, I stared down the dragon. “I’ll do it,” I said, standing resolutely.

With a surprised, but smug grin, the beast lay down his giant head and opened his mouth wide. I took in a deep breath before reaching out one hand to grab a grimy tooth to steady myself.

Then I stepped inside and the giant lizard’s jaws snapped shut.

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Hello, hello! It is I FlamingPhoenix back with another review! Its very cold, so great day to review! Lol

Right lets get right to it!

I gulped. “Um, hello?” I squeaked.


Lol well that's not the typical reaction, but in her defense I wouldn't know what to say either.

“Didn’t think I’d have the pleasure of seeing you so soon.” The dragon bent his head and peaked at me with one eye.


Oh his met her? How? Was it her Mom?

“I’m sorry,” I apologized, “But have we met?”

The dragon chuckled deeply causing his belly to shake the ground and make me bounce. “You were but a wee babe. However, I knew one day our paths would cross again.”


Okay so they have met, but how? And how did he knew they would meet again?

“Really?” I asked, at loss for any other words.

“Of course, with a destiny such as yours, I knew one day we would meet again.”

“My … destiny?” I repeated breathlessly, puzzled.


Oh what destiny? Does he know something we don't, and did Agar now about this? Did he know there was a dragon?

“Well, as far as I can see, your future remains blurred. It appears that eventually you will come to a crossroads,” the dragon squinted at the walls, as if seeing something past them, “Nevertheless, no matter which path you take, your actions will impact generations to come, marking your name in history.”


Oh dear, so depending what path she takes, she will get marked down in history, but will one be for good, and the other for bad? Is that a possibility?

“So, you can see the future?” I asked curiously.

“Only glimpses of what might be.” The dragon answered.


So that's how he knows, I was wondering how he new they would meet. So if he can see small things maybe he can worn her about things that might happen. But would that put the future at stake?

“Do you know if I will get my memories back?” I hung my head. “If I will remember my mother?”


Aww, poor thing. I can't imagine going through life not being able to remember things like my own mother. That's rough.

“Ah, but the memory of your lost mother is tied with yet more painful memories.” The dragon grinned sneakily. “These, once unlocked have the potential to unlock a darkness that lies deep within the core of your very heart.”


Oh wow, I wouldn't have thought about it that way. Gosh that hurts. But she could learn a thing or two from remembering couldn't she?

The dragon yawned. “Predictability bores me. So far you have struggled to be a hero, a savior to your people. But that may change. And I am looking forward to watching your journey.”


XD this dragon has a real personality and I'm enjoying it so much! Sure what his saying is really hard to hear, but I can see where his coming from...kind of. Lol

My eyes widened in horror. “Are you saying that I could become a villain?” The dragon smirked and nodded. I gulped, “I will eventually be blinded by my own greed and pride?” The very idea made my stomach twist and turn till I began to feel sick.


Ahh, so this is the other path he was talking about. So if I'm right the two crossroads she will be stuck at is, wanting to remember her mother but the greed and power that comes from that will make her evil. And the other one is coming to the point were she excepts she has lost her memory and finds strengthen in herself, and that will make her a better hero and ruler for her kingdom.
Hmm, that's very interesting.

I crossed my arms stubbornly. “Why would I come to you? You don’t have any answers now, and are only giving me more questions. Besides, you don’t seem to be for the cause of good.” I paused and frowned. “And I’m not sure if you are even evil. Which side would you choose?”


He is helping her, just not in the way she would expect. His one of those characters that speak in riddles. But I think I'm getting what he means.

The dragon lifted his head and grinned. “Quite observant you are, little one. I’m for neither side. I like to be amused and will aide whichever side I feel compelled to. Or never.” He lay back down, curling in like a snake. “As you can see, I’m quite busy.”


XD yet again another display of his character! His very amusing. And clearly doesn't like repeating himself.

“Step into my mouth.”


Crazy dragon, very crazy! O_O

I shook my head shamefully. “I do not. I forgot to ask Agar. He isn’t exactly someone easy to get along with,” I admitted. Then I raised my brows in surprise, realizing something else. “Hey, I don’t even know your name!”


Ah so Agar did know the dragon was there. That's why he left so quickly.
XD Agar isn't what I would call very talkative.

The dragon quirked a scaly brow. “Not sure. I may have eaten one. Irritating little fool he was. Cheated me out of my name with all his chatter.” My brows flew in surprise. “But doesn’t matter. Are you going to just stand here in this cave forever, or make a decision child?”


He ate him!!!!!!!!??????? Eeee his guy is a little iffy. Lol But hey he is funny and helping. So I can't complain.

Then I stepped inside and the giant lizard’s jaws snapped shut.


Ahh cliffhangers, aren't they wonderful! XD


Yet again you have written a really great chapter, I have so many questions, and I can't wait to read more to get the answers.
I do think you could add more description to this chapter, that's the only thing I feel its lacking. After your last chapter it feels like you were focusing on the dragon a lot. Don't get me wrong I love the dragon, his really cool and funny, but I feel you could make this even better with a little more description for detail. :D

If you don't agree feel free to ignore me.

I'll be moving onto the next three chapters right away, I don't want to be left behind again! And I refuse to be left on a cliffhanger!

Again great chapter! Hope you will post more soon.

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Honora
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Hey Cecy. Here for another review!

So I’m not really sure how to word this but I’ll do my best to try. For the most part, I enjoyed this chapter but the very beginning really threw me off. Again, I had no connection to Kkachi and that’s one thing I always look for when reading. I had no idea what she was feeling, her emotions or anything. It was as if you were reading me a story and not me being there with her. This chapter seemed a little rushed too. The first part was almost a little difficult to read because of this.

The second part though, was very interesting and different. I would never have thought to make her go into his mouth because they were sealed in secrecy. Awesome imagination! That’s something I also look for in books is very different ideas. Something out of the ordinary. Well my dear, going into a dragons mouth to contain knowledge is very different indeed. Awesome on that. ;)

I’m also very interested in what the dragon has told her. It seems very endangering and twisted. A lot of plot was revealed in this chapter and that’s really nice. It’s giving your readers more of an idea of where this is going and something to look forward to in future chapters. :)

Keep up the good work! :D

Your friend,
Honora <3

P.S. I still loved your work and just wanted to help! I know you know this already but I’m going to remind you anyways. ;)

No worries at all! I appreciate your honesty and I know it is hard at times. Thanks!!! It will help a lot in future chapters and when I edit

No problem! <3

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Honora wrote a review · Sun May 10, 2020 12:06 am

Hey Cecy. Here for another review!

So I’m not really sure how to word this but I’ll do my best to try. For the most part, I enjoyed this chapter but the very beginning really threw me off. Again, I had no connection to Kkachi and that’s one thing I always look for when reading. I had no idea what she was feeling, her emotions or anything. It was as if you were reading me a story and not me being there with her. This chapter seemed a little rushed too. The first part was almost a little difficult to read because of this.

The second part though, was very interesting and different. I would never have thought to make her go into his mouth because they were sealed in secrecy. Awesome imagination! That’s something I also look for in books is very different ideas. Something out of the ordinary. Well my dear, going into a dragons mouth to contain knowledge is very different indeed. Awesome on that. ;)

I’m also very interested in what the dragon has told her. It seems very endangering and twisted. A lot of plot was revealed in this chapter and that’s really nice. It’s giving your readers more of an idea of where this is going and something to look forward to in future chapters. :)

Keep up the good work! :D

Your friend,
Honora <3

P.S. I still loved your work and just wanted to help! I know you know this already but I’m going to remind you anyways. ;)

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neptune wrote a review · Sun Apr 26, 2020 8:33 pm

Back again!

This chapter is definitely different from the previous ones I've read, because we get a more dialogue heavy section in comparison to the mostly descriptive chapters in the past. The dialogue felt very natural and smooth! I like the way the dragon's speech was bolded; it emphasized his words and highlighted his ferocious demeanor.

Assuming the dragon hasn't yet made an appearance in the novel (again, I'm sorry I haven't read many earlier chapters!), then I feel like it was a little confusing that Kkachi immediately was concerned with everything he had to say. An example:

I frowned. “You don’t approve?” I asked.

I think it might be beneficial for the reader to be explained Kkachi's thought process/understand why exactly she cares so much. Obviously a dragon that can read the future and has met her before is pretty awesome, but they haven't technically met before so it felt kind of sudden seeing Kkachi immediately believe/care what he had to say. I like that we get some of her skepticism when the dragon asks her to trust him―it would be nice to see some of that earlier on, too.

I like how you get personal by adding the detail of Kkachi thinking about her mother. I think it added a layer of empathy for her and seeing her slightly vulnerable added towards her character, which felt a little disconnected last chapter. It would be interesting to see more growth of her character in the future! We've got a glimpse of her acting with strength this time around, and I could see that evolving in coming chapters.

Let me know if you have any questions (feel free to disregard any comments that are inaccurate due to me not reading previous chapters) & keep writing! c:

Thanks for pointing out that inconsistency with Kkachi caring what the Dragon thought. You're right...don't make sense. ;)

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Chapter 34 is not the best part to start reading the book with, actually.
But what you can get from a chapter 34 is... curiousity.
I've got very interested in the full book, and though I can't be sure I'll have time to read it, but it has definitely drawn my attention. The dialogue I just read in this part made me laugh, which is good, because the author makes me see character's emotions and faces. I like when it happens. And also I like dragons, though I have rather a specific view of them. This dragon whose name we cannot yet know is quite an interesting one. The main character is even more interesting. So I'll probably start reading the book from the very beginning, or at least try to. Adventure, love and an inner conflict of the main hero is a promising mix.
Thank you for this part and keep on writing!
P.S.
Sorry for being so brief, please. It seems like the weather's hit me.

Sincerely yours,
Drak.

Thanks Drak for taking the time to read this chapter. I'm glad it has you intrigued and I hope the rest doesn't disappoint. Just fair warning...my first chapters are very choppy and lack much description. :)



If you can't describe what you are doing as a process, you don't know what you're doing.
— W. Edwards Deming