this is such a unique poem and i thoroughly enjoyed reading it. the use of your creaative devices while writing this is fun to witness. the red flesh-flash imagery has got to be my favorite. i loved the usage of the words pulsating twice; almost as if you are mocking it. although it did take me a few reads to truly understand the piece, (which i still believe i quite havent grasped haha) it was enticing for sure
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