Hello writer! You got real talent because I know writing poems is not easy i just want to tell you that please try to use proper punctuation marks and write full lines instead of broken phrases because it kind of breaks the link of the poem and the reader. Yet your poem is interesting and good. The most special thing about his poetry? It's simple. The magic it creates is beautiful, yet simple. The smiles which he spreads are many in number, and yet, all his work is not complex, it's simple. Keep writing and i hope my review was useful to you in any way. New to this site but loved your work. Sorry for a short review.
Urvika
Points: 28
Reviews: 13
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