Augustus was beautiful. Like to the point where our main hero Riley, couldn't stop drawing him. Of course Riley's friends Tim and Fiona always wanted the Art of Augustus. Of course Riley gave them his least favorites.The two of them had no idea that Riley had a crush on him, he learned to keep many things secret, such as that.Riley was usually with his other friends, the popular people of the musical arts department.
He stared at his friends , trying to understand what exactly they're talking about.
But he wasn't paying attention. "Riley!"
The one said, snapping him out of his thoughts.
Riley jumped back, "Yes?"
"Can you go in the band room and get my math book? In the practice room.Letter C." The one asked, raising her eyebrows expectantly.
"Of course," Riley says, his hands were folded behind his back as he walked into the chaotic band room.looked around,
"Where are the practice rooms?" He wandered around.He was lost and confused.
"Where is this room?" Riley growled, annoyed how his friends barely give him detail.
He wandered around for what to be the fifth time.He muttered a bunch of profanity. He grabbed a chair and sat down.But then there was a large shadow over him.Riley looked up.
And there he was.
Augustus.
The prettiest boy in the school. Girls wanted him, guys wanted to be him. He was friendly and often easy to talk to. Augustus would wear thick square glasses and often had a smile on his face.
Riley's face slightly heated up.
"Hi!" Augustus said, extending his hand. Riley reached out for his hand.
"I've seen you before," Augustus said, raising an eyebrow, "You're here quite often."
"Yeah," Riley answers, "Augustus, right?"
"Yep that's me!" Augustus grinned, "What's your name?"
"Riley," Riley answered.
"Nice to meet you Riley," Augustus grinned.His eyes crinkled, which Riley had noticed, that was Augustus's way of showing actually sincerity.Riley smiled back and bowed his head.
"Are you lost by the way?" Augustus asked, tilting his head to the left.
Riley blushed, "Yeah I am, um do you know where practice room C is?"
"Ah yes, " Augustus replied rolling his eyes and getting slightly angry, "Did they send you over here?"
"My friends?" Riley asked,"All I see is the numbered ones."
"Of course, when she doesn't wanna talk to someone, she tells them to find practice room C, and then if the person can't find it she goes in herself and goes to her locker and grabs the book and goes back and shoos them away, " Augustus says," Come on I know where her locker is,"
Riley frowned, he knew he was the "pretty serving boy" to her already, but to sink that low. Wow. That hurt. He must've frowned because Augustus looked at him with some worry.
"Cheer up," Augustus said, "You can hang out with me after you get her book."
Riley blushed again, "Really? But aren't I just a nuisance?"
"Nah," Augustus grinned,"You're my pal!"
"But we just met," Riley says, averting his eyes away from the boy.
"That's alright," Augustus says, smiling warmly again. They were still holding each other’s hands, but neither seemed to mind.
Without anything else said, the two of them went to the girl's locker and Augustus opened it up, still knowing her combination.For some reason they still didn't let go of each other's hands yet. Riley found it awkward but yet endearing.
Augustus leaned in and grabbed the textbook.
"Math right?" Augustus asked,, opening the covered book to check if it's the math textbook.
"Yes yes," Riley answered, "Thank you so much."
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Hello, ashtheawesome!!

This is Eros here with a review for your beautiful piece!!
Well, I saw the title and just got attracted to it. I decided to peep in and see what it has got.
The novel has a BANGING start.
And the story has a nicee plot. So, this story revolves around Augustus and Riley. It seems very unique. I want to know more about Riley and Augustus.
Tell me when you release the next chapter. It is gonna be an interesting novel to read.
Thw words you have used descibed everything very beautifull.
And I'd suggest you the same thing as DDemi said...describing "the one".
Rest everything was really awesome! GREAT work!
Keep writing...
Never cease...
Because we all love to keep reading such beautiful works.
Have a great day/evening!
And ya, please don't forget to notify me when you release the next part!
Thank you!!!!!!!!
Chapter 2 is up by the way!
WelC!
What! Chapter 2 is up!! Let me see it!
I just posted it aaaa
Pretty Boy Chapter 2
Yaayy!! It was amazingly awesome!!
Loved it!
Hello ash! DDemi here to review your story!
P.S.- do I see Dan in your avie???that means you are a *pauses dramatically and whispers* phan!!!
Okay so let's get straight to business, shall we?
The concept of writing a gay love-story is pretty new to me,((( yeah I know I know we live in the 21st century and that it is no big deal, but hey it's not my fault that I don't bump into such stories...is it?)))
but anyway I bumped into it now right? and I certainly plan on following it.
Well anyway, down to my review...
Of course Riley's friends Tim and Fiona always wanted the Art of Augustus. Of course Riley gave them his least favorites.
This part sounded a bit awkward to me, I guess you should put an 'and' before of course (caution: I do not know if it's grammatically right or not, but as a reader it sounds better with it...)
The one said, snapping him out of his thoughts
Well, mind giving "the one" a name or even if not a name, maybe physical appearance or both.
Because untill u give your reader something to base their imagination upon how can they really imagine the scene?
Here the case with "the one" is, u don't tell your readers anything about this character, so when at the end u make the one a female, I had to go up again and look who we were even talking about in the first place.
So yeah give your character a face/name there...
And uh, put space after full stops,
Also I would like you to describe Augustus and Riley's appearance. It's always good to have a face to go with names right?
So yeah that's all I had to tell you to work upon, after reading this piece. I would like to read more about Riley and Augustus.
Update me when the next chap is released.
~DiergentDemigod
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OMG that's awesome! Fellow phan! *popes champagne bottle and dances around*
Thank you so much!! Also chapter 2 is up!