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Hidere,
So, I was confused on the POV here - in a good way. At first I was like "Oh, this is about parents talking about their kids" but then I was like "No! This is a kid talking about his parents" and that went on. It gives me something to think about, thus I will remember this poem and yuppers. Besides that, this is good. I like it. And stuffs.
So now I leave.
Byebye
Hey ShadowVyper!
Just a quick review!
I really enjoyed this poem, it kind of makes parent hood look 'happy' but 'sad' at the same time. You didn't rhyme all the way through, but that makes it all the more unique. Your ending made questions in my head, which is good as it makes the reader want more.
It was depressing in a way, and I didn't get bored of it once which I liked.
I didn't see anything wrong with the spelling or punctuation, though don't take my word on it.
Good work!
From Em