Published December 18, 2018
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So I must say this again, you still have me hooked. I am not really impressed with Raffie's decisions that he makes. I am not happy with Wendy's character.... Why do I feel as if she is based on me? I don't even know why I am still reading it, but it's like I can't put it down. Good job with this piece. I can't wait to see what happens next... This better not be the end. I need more. I feel as if I am living for this novel. Anyways, just send me a private message some time so I can talk to you.
Wendy was definitely not based on you lol. And yes, Raffie makes some interesting decisions, doesn't he? That's why the book is in the psychological horror genre. Remember I said that there are 31 chapters total. And I did PM you btw, yesterday. Do you know how to do that? I'll send another one.