I will admit, you had me from the start.
Once I tasted you there was no going back.
Just sweet enough to balance out the bitter,
your my "exact brand of heroin."
When I wake up I think of you,
and long for when we meet again.
Slide delicatley between my lips
and warm what is cold inside.
I don't know what tomorrow holds
but I know just how I like you.
So when I dedicate this to you...
Just know, Coffee, I love you.If you like this poem or coffee then please press the button!
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Haha! I got a laugh out of this. It's funny how it can be taken two ways. It was really serious at first, so I thought you were talking about a human. :P and i like the twilight reference. (: this was really funny. i thought it was a romance/love poem at first, ha. keep writing, you have something; use it. (:
Hahahaha okay must say that was awesome! I thought it was a love peom at first but coffee is very dear to my heart as well
Excellent play on words!
Okay, I really did get a great laugh out of this one. I didn't know where you were going with it and I was a bit on edge. Then I saw there was no rating and I was like "This can't be too bad then...". Coffee....lol
The writing was good and it made me think you were really really serious and that made it even better. Nice Twilight reference 
Good job!
It is a funny poem. I like the reference to Twilight. You have to remember to capitalize the first word of each line. Under the line, where it says: Silence ia a girls louderst cry it should be Silence it a girl's loudest cry.