Chocolate hair in a pleasant breeze,
soft green eyes full and bright.
Everything done with grace and ease,
by the heavens, what a sight.
A dark angel cast down from above,
walks the earth like one of us.
await in a heart devoid of love.
Filling hearts of humans with revolting lust.
Forever waiting for an end that wont come.
gone from the day and into the dark,
a time of happiness is over and done
but she puts a brave wall around her heart.
Wandering in the eternal night,
a dark beauty looking for light.
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Heyo... So it was title that caught my attention... Your poem is good...The rhyme was just fab...I really liked it!!
Harshita:)