Heya! I have nothing to say about this poem other than the fact that it is written very well, and gave us the message you meant to express! Props to you, Panda!
I love it, the whole theme of suicide... taking a realistic thing like that an dputting it into an almost wistful way like this.
But I must have to say, I would have liked more information on WHY she was thinking about falling. What made her want to do suicide? What happened to her?
In the end, it was quite sad.
Your poem had an engaging rhyme- scheme and I loved it! It's really catchy too.
Keep writing like this! Aqua. XD
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