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im the only change and i bet everyone's tired of it

by LadyBug



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Tue Apr 09, 2024 7:11 am
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22Midnight wrote a review...



Hi names 22Midnight
hope your doing well, let's get into it!

the person who wrote this is showing a lot of pain and obviously want's to be a good person but thinks there not. It is a very simple but very well done poem that I enjoyed reading from finish to end, you have a good way of putting everything into words but making it seem simple in away that is easy to understand. To me this showed that life can be very hard and people judge themselves way to harshly sometimes, and they just need to take a step back and look at everything they've done and learn from it and be thankful for being tort a new lesson.

I do hope this isn't very realistic though for your sake, because I want you to know that you are loved and should be valued by everyone around you.

anyway that's it from me

hope you have a great dawn/dusk/midnight

See Ya




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KaavyaK says...



That's relatable, by the way nice poem.




LadyBug says...


your neighbor too huh



KaavyaK says...


Nah friends...




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