Honestly, I am always astonished by how great you can write poems! So let’s review it
I like the writing style a lot, the use of vagueness let us reader’s imaginations run wild and picture head scenarios about what is going on and how these two people had parted.
The page you stated, it made me as a reader think of a fictional character. It made me imagine a reader loving, adoring, longing for a fictional character who doesn’t exist, yet suffered a loss.
(Your writing style kinda reminded me of Tahereh Mafi :3 I love that)
Points: 43
Reviews: 8
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