Because - Chap. 26

by KJ

Published January 24, 2009

In Because

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mandeyy
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mandeyy wrote a review Review · Jul 5, 2009


I agree , James has lost some cool factor with me , but it had to be done .
Oh poor poor Becca D:

Good job on the opportunity ! :D

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Just_Listen
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Just_Listen commented Comment · Jan 25, 2009

That is awesome!!! You really deserve this! I've been following what you have written but never posted anything because it is all so good! I hope you continue writing and the best of luck to you!

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Aubree
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Aubree wrote a review Review · Jan 25, 2009

You really deserve this KJ. I'v followed your series but never posted, because it was perfect. It can't get better than this. I'm praying you get published. It'll be a best seller. You deserve it more than anyone. You have a gift.

I hope you stick with writing. I really feel touched by your pieces.
Aubree

Angel of Death wrote a review Review · Jan 24, 2009

Hey KJ! Thanks for the heads up but....

OMG!! That's so awesome! I'm keeping my fingers crossed for you, but I know she'll say yes because this is truly a good story.

Oh and I'm sorry if I did see any grammatical mistakes and didn't point them out because this chapter was so good and that mixed with the news makes it hard to concentrate.
But I will say I am hating Becca's brother. He really left her...ooh I hate him!

Okay, okay, I'm off to the next chapter.

Good job and keep writing,

~Angel

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Venom
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Venom wrote a review Review · Jan 24, 2009

Oh, my! I am so very happy for you! You really deserved this opportunity. Anyways, on to what I thought about this piece.

I really liked James, but that little outburst just made him lose a whole bunch of awesome points.

There really isn't anything else I can say about this that is constructive. I could ramble on and on about how amazing that is, but I won't. I hope you get this published. Please, contact me if you do.

-Venom.

P.S. Sorry I haven't posted on Because in a while. I have been keeping up with reading it! I would just like you to know that your story is the only reason I still sign on to YWS.

P.P.S. It is so weird. I just finished reading Thirteen Reasons Why! It was an amazing book.



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