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*KJ~
I think I'm going to read the whole and rest of it tonight. It's just so good!!
You know, I was worried that something like this was going to happen. Her dream, that happened, right?
I can't say much because I really wanna read 20.
Oh, and I don't think I'm ready when he loses his mind. Scary!!!
Another great chapter!
*Merry
*gasps and sprints to next chapter*
YAY!!!
Hey KJ,
This was a good chapter as usual, and I'm glad you posted Chapter 20, so I don't have to complain. I think this chapter is a very crucial and important one. It lets us know the extent of her nightmares and the pain that she feels. And you use the title in this chapter, which is also another plus. I liked the dream a lot. I didn't find anything wrong,
So off to the next chapter and keep writing,
~Angel