GAH! My hands are shaking! I'm sorry, I'd love to critique this piece, but I just can't! Your characters are so real, and the imagery you paint so strong I feel like I'm sitting there by the tree watching the whole thing. And the ending! OMG! I jumped up and paced so excited. You are soooooooooo talented!!! I'm jealous! Keep it up!
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