*KJ~
Well, here I am reviewing your Because. And thanks for telling me in our conversations. I really needed the boost in the morning. So you guess what that means?
Your Because novel has truly woken me up and now I know I'll have a happy day. Because of you! Thanks!
Now I haven't read this novel is quite some time, but this chapter really got me into it again. (that's a good thing)
Oh, I'm a little curious, what was Becca watching on the Discovery Channel?
I really love how you portrayed James. Like everyone else said, you wish he was real and that you could actually meet him. He really is like an older brother. And plus, I don't have a brother (only sisters), so I'm stealing James! (for the time being)
I really am going to have to finish this because I really want to know why Sheldon beat the crap out of James. You might already said in the earlier chapters, but I already forgot. Bad, me.
Anywho, I never really saw any mistakes. That shows how improving you are to become a great writer!
Great job!!
*Merry
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