Tell me, spell me.
The words you know but cannot
possibly understand - British tongues
taut against Canadian cheeks.
You who
taps the beds of your fingertips
across parchment like some forlorn
baby grand. You’d expect
some kind of music.
I
Expected a song in words
but the sound delved too deep
in pattering epithets. Callused, useless
hands. An ink-stained breath
that soaked away your muse.
Drowned
in black and blue.
a vicissitude for the pretentious
Darcy’s and Rochester’s. I preferred
a spiteful Heathcliff. And you, sir,
are no Alec d’Urberville .
Let’s be honest, though -
I could never be Elizabeth Bennett.
And I don’t plan on dying old.
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Beautiful!
/would do a review but is kind of in awe so she decided to leave a comment instead/
anyway, I love it!