Hey there, Sofie here with a review
Well, I'm definitely laughing out loud at the imagery of you running around the room while a fire alarm is going off. Hilarious, oh my goodness. Last stanza made me laugh even harder. "Where the midnight toast never burned". SO funny. I also really really liked this line;
"I'm electrocuted out of coherence".
So vivid, I love it. You did such a great job at painting the scene and putting us in the room where the incident happened. I totally felt the panic of the alarm going off. Great job
Points: 51
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