Hello there, DrFeelGood! Thanks for replying to my thread by the way! CaptainSaltWater here with a review for you!
First off, I really like it! A couple things I realized in it. You spelled skeptical wrong. You spelled it "sceptical." Also, on the fourth line, did you mean fellar, becuase seller and feller rhyme, but seller and filler don't. Finally, on pretty much all of the lines, you started each with a capital letter. Here is an example.
Being DrFeelGood isn’t easy,
Isn’t this world a bit too cheesy?
In that part, you started a sentence on the top line, and then you ended it with a comma, and then on the next line, you capitalized the first letter. That is really all I have to say. Otherwise, great job! I really like the rhyme scheme and the formatting is amazing. I would LOVE to see more of you works. Don't give up and always write, DrFeelGood!
-CaptainSaltWater
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