When Youtube had a Problem!

First of all, hats off to your creativity! I liked how you made it seem like G+ was a bad guy. I also love how realistic it is. I can't tell you how many hurtful youtube comments i have seen. I loved how well this flowed. And I agree with what the dad said "But Humans had created us to spread useful knowledge.
What’d they get by harming their own creation?” It is so true. It seems like we created these things just to spread hate. I loved this! Keep writing!


Hannah

Hi there! This is a really interesting piece of work - allowing us to see the perspective of the internet, if it had one. I really like how you've personified Youtube, Wiki etc to seem like a normal family - almost relatable in the case of when something goes wrong.. and the "disappointed parent" comes along .

Also, I like the enjambment you've used to link ideas together - your poem flows really well and I like the ideas that are portrayed...making us question why is there all this hatred, why does there need to be?

The only criticism I have is that it seems more story-like in my eyes...but I enjoyed it nevertheless sooo well done

This deserves to be published hahahaha so true and great................

This deserves to be published hahahaha so true and great................

Fantasydragon here!
I must say that this is comical yet true. Why does the world have impure videos containing impure innuendoes?! *cries like crazy*
Now, on to the critique. Well, I can't find some stuff to critisize about. I think the only thing is that I am not sure of this was supposed to be like a song or poem that rhymes. For nothing rhymes. I know that some styles have no rhymes, but I am sort of perplexed here. But you don't need to change it. Not everything has to rhyme.

Good luck and keep writing!
Very truly yours,
fantasydragon01.

You made my day! You are awesome, dude!!!!

Hey.

Oh how I loved this So amazing and so creative. No flaws, ideas flow right to you dude.

Youtube, darling, I know how you feel. And G+, I can understand. Poor Google, bears all the pain. :p

Puns and seriousness all along

Good job.

Keep writing and stay blessed.

xoxo

i love this

I believe it would be "... asked him if he could help him out." I really like your use of "enqired". The google+ seeming to be an antagonist is awesome. I like how it mostly gets resolved to be the humans fault (it always is). A pretty good piece. (danget, not long enough to count as a review)

Second feature

a real fun to read poem. a perfect satire. I love the use of quote in poem but i think its a little too much here, just reduce it a bit and make a work a little more compact and precise.no more suggestions for this great work just keep writing more of such funny poems and please upload them here as we love to enjoy then.
keep writing
Rituparna

*Likes* (that was sort of a YouTube pun)

Only thing I'd say is that this sounds a lot more like a short story than a poem. I guess it could come under narrative poem maybe, instead of dramatic.

I enjoyed it, btw

I loved this. I am a big fan of satire, and you nailed it. While it was quite funny, you still had something intelligent to say and some really good questions to raise about humanity. It is a very difficult question though isn't it; why are we such arseholes? Lol, pardon my french.

The way you depicted google as the Dad, and google+ as the kid alongside youtube was brilliant. It was clever way of clarifying your point so that the audience can relate and understand what you are trying to say.

I am a youtuber as well, and I understand this definitely. People can be quite horrible behind a screen.

Legible.

It's very intelligent and creative.. Good work.. i won't give a review. For that SGC my self esteem level is now down to 0 percent.
Abuse each other, huh. yeah.
However, keep up your good work, i know you will. and congratulations, your work is one of the featured ones.

Hahahahahaha! Helloooo! This is Tay 01 here lover and great fan of an old film, Finding Nemo. And Hohoho! Hold your horses there, I see a funny poem coming haha. About the use of DADDY GOOGLE!!!!! Okay I have to calm down now I am getting to excited here and haha!

Okay. Nice poem though. And funny of course, as you can guess from the start of reading this review. Oh my gosh! What a humour your poem is. Alright, steady now......Oh dear. sorry but,

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Okay. What I wanted to say is that you have a nice poem with a nice story with nice rhymes and nice rhythm and also a nice question and conclusion. Not to say but, that is what people are doing now. And it's still true though, why are humans like that?

Not really mice of them though. Like nice.

I mean:

Not really nice of them though. Like mice. There.

Okay yes this review is to make you laugh (popefully, I mean hopefully HAHAHA!)

Okay that's it with laughing with me in a review Bye Bye Laughing!

Alright. Your poem still could use a LITTLE as in just a little more rhyme and that will sort things out. Now I have to go bye (types in a rush)

~~Tay01

Hi!
This poem is amazing! I definitely chuckled while reading through it. It's a very cool and different way to write about a really awful topic that affects so many people. You keep it light-hearted enough to keep people reading about it.
I liked how you incorporated four different websites and gave them all a relation to each other.

"Daddy and his sons are still searching for the answer,
“Why do these humans fight and abuse each other?"
Ending it with the question and having the websites searching for the answer was a perfect way to finish it.

I honestly don't have any critiques for it. I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end. When I clicked on the title I thought it would be silly in the it's entirety but I was pleasantly surprised the see it had a message too!
Awesome work!