Hey there! My name is M, and I just want to get this out of the way-
Every time I see a work of yours pop up on my screen, I get this little thrill. You're magnificent. Your language is exquisite, painting an image, a masterpiece, in my mind every single time I deign to read the words you provide. You're one of the best poets on this crazy website.
This work in particular packed quite the emotional punch. And, my gosh, I love how you included friendship in this tale of separation/heartbreak/anger. You really don't see that often. I didn't know I needed that little detail until I saw it now.
There's so much I could go on and on about in this piece of art. Your word choice is very good, not too simple, but not too easy either. Words such as "stoic", "nevermore", "livid", and "blatant" really contribute to the atmosphere and keep this piece crisp and new.
Altogether, I really enjoyed this work.
I can't wait to read more of your art!
-M
Points: 55
Reviews: 46
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