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alliyah's poetry reviews

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A WILD wrist-a-wrist APPEARED!

I'll make it worth double yer normal wages!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.




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I'm all caught up! Any other review requests?
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Could I grab a review on my poetry if that's okay?

Belli Gloria

Thank you!




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could you review this pleas @alliyah This World Part one :D also this is Humor, Dramatic, and this is part one to the poem there is won more part coming.
Love will come to you in time but it takes patients to wait for its arrival!




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Nice new poem @EagleFly - Thanks for the review request! I do like getting requests for poetry reviews on this thread because it makes it easy to remember! :)

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I'm all caught up with reviewing at the moment. So if anyone has a poem they'd like me to review - leave a link below!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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I was told to post a link so here you goooo

As you do
Been exhibiting homosexual behavior since Roman Times
Why am i here?
For all of you.
Please don't leave me now




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Anymore folks in need of poetry reviews?

(Also if I promised a review on something and forgot to do it, you can always leave a link in here - and I will likely review it! :mrgreen: )

EDIT:
Adding these to my "will review list" so that I don't forget:
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From Chinku
Deep blue sea
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Chinku/One-dark-night-142497
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Chinku/quotLittle-squab-a-little-hopequot-142528

From Muzzammil
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Muzzammil/LIFE-is-Light--and-Darkness-142522
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Muzzammil/The-Disordered-Land-142525
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Muzzammil/Its-Not-Just-A-Game--142538

From EagleFly
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=142541
Last edited by alliyah on Fri Nov 09, 2018 7:17 am, edited 8 times in total.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Hi!
An all-around criticism of good day / bad day is really needed and would be appreciated.




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All caught up again! Any poetry review requests are appreciated! :)

List for my reference of non-WRFF review requests that I'll do this month:

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Last edited by alliyah on Mon Dec 03, 2018 7:13 am, edited 2 times in total.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Can you please review my new chapter, the Fighter and the Dragon chapter 2? Really need critique!
Free reviews by Fanta! [Accepting!]

The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.




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Hey!
Would you like to read my newest poem?
It’s called : Poem by Roger McGough. The Sound Collector




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Could you read my story, Danger on the dance floor?
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart




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CAN you please read my poem Winter, and Poem by Roger McDough. The Sound Collector ?




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Hi, alliyah, I got a poem for ya! ;D

Would you be able to review let me be hope? Mostly not sure about the flow of this poem, and one of your reviews would be so very helpful <3
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There is no way to happiness; happiness is the way.

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