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alliyah's poetry reviews

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A Feminist's Love Story

Would love to hear your thoughts on this! Thanks.




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And done! All caught up again.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Since you're accepting to review poetry: Out of Nowhere

Please review my work and point out anything there is needed to be pointed out.

Thank You!




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Hi @emma1045 thanks for the request! You've come to the right place. I will hopefully get that review out within the next 3 days. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Hullo alliyah! I would love a review on my poem, Not enough. I would just appreciate some general feedback. Thanks! :D
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Do whatever you want, forever <3
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Sure thing @TheBlueCat ! :) I'd be happy to!

Also, @emma1045 your work is marked as a draft, once it's open again let me know and I will review it.


Edit: I just finished BlueCat's poem, so I'm all caught up again. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Hi alliyah!
If you could, I’d love it if you could offer some criticism on this poem. <3
Winter coming
I think it got out of the Green Room rather lightly and I feel like it’s too much description without other stuff? But anyway, I’d love to hear your thoughts if you aren’t too busy!
Parlez-vous français?




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Hey, please review The Law of Wishes and Desire! <3 I need more feedback on this.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Hullo again! Since you gave me such a good review before, I would love if you would review my haiku, Heartbreak. No hurry! :D
Unofficial Blue Cat of YWS =^-^=
Do whatever you want, forever <3
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Finally finished those last two reviews, so feel free to bring in your requests - expect about a week delay in me responding to review requests, but rest assured I will always get them eventually! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Lol I'm here again. What a stalker. >.>

Please review Dear Victoria, You Kill Me! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Caught up again!

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Note to self: Review Lumi's poem this week. i have no choice but to love
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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You're the person I look for when I need more feedback, hehe. Please review Clash of Desires! Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Ah thanks! I will be checking this one out this weekend @Lightsong. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return



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